I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Daisy! My name is Nadia and I am from Hornby High School. I am commenting on students blog posts for the Summer! This is a great blog post! You have made a really nice Biteable to show your work instead of simply putting words on a blog post. I really like how you included music and different images/videos to kind of represent some of the powers you would want. I also like how you included a way for other readers to see the challenges of the SLJ with the instruction to look at the Uru Manuka website. I also like the addition of the reasons as to why you would have those certain powers. I think I would also have invisibility. If you could choose more than four powers, which other powers would you choose? Next time I think it would be beneficial for you to mention that this is for the SLJ, whether it is in your title or in a small blurb explaining the activity.
Congratulations on another blog post, keep up the great work, I hope to see a reply or two from you, Until next time - Nadia :)
Hey Nadia. Thanks I always try my best in learning even if I have to catch up! I love invisibility to I would have chosen it but those ones took over. I would choose a forcefield thingy majiggy and brainwashing power!! I did not have time to write the blurb but I'll do it later!
Hi Daisy! That's awesome Daisy! Those are great powers! I would definitely choose invisibility. Thanks for taking my advice! Until next time - Nadia :)
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Daisy!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Nadia and I am from Hornby High School. I am commenting on students blog posts for the Summer! This is a great blog post! You have made a really nice Biteable to show your work instead of simply putting words on a blog post. I really like how you included music and different images/videos to kind of represent some of the powers you would want. I also like how you included a way for other readers to see the challenges of the SLJ with the instruction to look at the Uru Manuka website. I also like the addition of the reasons as to why you would have those certain powers. I think I would also have invisibility.
If you could choose more than four powers, which other powers would you choose?
Next time I think it would be beneficial for you to mention that this is for the SLJ, whether it is in your title or in a small blurb explaining the activity.
Congratulations on another blog post, keep up the great work,
I hope to see a reply or two from you,
Until next time
- Nadia :)
Hey Nadia.
ReplyDeleteThanks I always try my best in learning even if I have to catch up!
I love invisibility to I would have chosen it but those ones took over. I would choose a forcefield thingy majiggy and brainwashing power!!
I did not have time to write the blurb but I'll do it later!
Hi Daisy!
DeleteThat's awesome Daisy!
Those are great powers! I would definitely choose invisibility.
Thanks for taking my advice!
Until next time
- Nadia :)