The Corona song!

 

Hi, guys, I have finished my SLJ "song writing" and I think it is good, my video explains it. Please tell me what you think.

My 3 haikus...

Hi, guys, these are the 3 haikus that I wrote for the SLJ. (It was a little late cause I can't go on my device that often)

Neptune my reading sample.

 

This slide is all about Neptune the god with facts and you will have to test your knowledge on the quiz...

I really hope you enjoy until next time... SEE YA.

Mosquitoes

 

This is a slide about mosquitoes because we were learning about them Trisanah and I made this together.

Baby Underpants!

This is captain underpants in baby form. I drew this with help of a youtube video. I will give you the link.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NN8FQTn8rJ4

 

Easel.ly

 

Today for the google summit session 2 I learned how to use easel.ly.

This is a video telling you what to do on easel.ly. I hope you enjoy it. 

*Easel.ly*

15th of september 2020

  Hi, today I tried stage seven on prototec. I did better than last time but I still need to improve on a few things. 

Here it is:

"My shadow" poem response

 My Shadow:

The connections I made to the title when you are being copied and shadowed without you knowing.

The poem is organised in four stanzas each one has four lines and the rhyming pattern is AABB AABB AABB AABB.

The tone of the poem is sad, pale and sleepy because it sounds sad and annoyed at their shadow following them.

The poetic devices are similes and personification. There are similes when it says "like an India-rubber ball" and when it says like an arrant sleepy-head". There is personification when it says "he's a coward" and "lazy little shadow".

I think the meaning is always watching your back and making sure that you are protected where ever you go. 

14th of september 2020

 Hi, today I tried stage seven on prototec. I did better than last time but I still need to improve on a few things. 

Here it is:

Next time I will try to improve on fractions and percentages.

Can you give me feedback? 

10th of september 2020

 Hi, today I tried stage seven on prototec. I did better than last time but I still need to improve on a few things. 

Here it is:

 

Next time I will try to improve on fractions and percentages.

Can you give me feedback? 

 

I wandered lonely as a cloud poem response (By William Wordsworth)

 

The connections I made to the title was when your friends ditch you and you are trying to find a new friend or two. That's sad cause if I was like that I would want a warm hug from Olaf.

The poem was organised in four stanzas each with six lines and the rhyming pattern was ABABCC ABABCC ABABCC ABABCC.

The tone of the poem for me was happy and at the same time sad and pale. I think it was happy when it says "golden daffodils" and I think that it is sad when it says "They flash upon that inward eye" and pale when it says "I wandered lonely as a cloud that floats on high o'er vales and hills".

The poetic devices in this poem are personification, simile, hyperbole and alliteration. There is alliteration when it says "but be" there is hyperbole when it says "ten thousand I saw at a glance" because well there are not that many daffodils so it is an exaggeration there is another one when it says " a host of golden daffodils" because daffodils are yellow and how can they be hosts?. There a simile when it says "continuous as the stars that shine" and there is lots of personification like when it says " fluttering and dancing in the breeze" and "tossing their heads" and the waves beside them dance" there is two more the second to the last one that I found was "outdid the waves in glee" and last but not least "and dances with the daffodils".

I think the meaning of the poem is thinking about not losing your friend and what you can see around you when you pay attention to the things in our world.  

If poetry response

 The author of this poem is RUDYARD KIPLING.

The connections that I, made to the title was if something happens out of the blue or suddenly to you but you don't expect it to happen.

The poem was organised like 4 stanzas each with 8 lines and the rhyming pattern is AAAABCBC ABABCDCD ABABCDCD ABABCDCD.

The tone of the poem for me was when you read this poem it feels like it's the boys dad or mum saying advice to their son so that he knows what to do when he gets older I think that because it says “And which is more you’ll be a man my son!”

The personification and hyperbole. There is Hyperbole when it says "to keep your head when all are losing theirs" And "You can meet with T

riumph and Disaster". There is personification when it says "Don't deal in lies" and "can dream and not make your dreams your master" last of all "treat those two imposters just the same".

The meaning of the poem for me was when your parents are giving you advice about something and YOU NEED TO PAY ATTENTION.

   

Beehive/bees Geometry

 

Hello, this is my second version of geometry turtle it is a beehive with two bees going off to collect pollen to make honey. (YUM) As I said before this was for our learning about lines of symmetry and I got the idea from Trisanah because she made a bird! (Sorry Trisanah) I would really like to get some feedback on this, please.  

Geometry Turtle

 

This photo is of a turtle that I made for geometry. We were learning about lines of symmetry. Lines of symmetry are when a picture is the same on both sides take a square for example if you fold it in half horizontally or vertically and the are the same shape on each side then that is symmetry when you fold a square diagonally then it will be the same shape so as you can see squares have many lines of symmetry.

I hope you like my turtle can you give me feedback? What can I do to improve?  

Prototec for the 1st of September

Hello!

Today I tried stage 7 and OMG it was hard I hardly got anything right. (I hardly did any of it because I had no idea what it meant. )

Here is what I did:

I don't think I did well but could I have feedback?

My second prototec for the 31st of August

 Basic Facts Learning 

Today I did stage six prototec. I got them all right. 

This is my Stage 6 prototec:

Prototec August 31st

 Basic Facts Learning 

Today I did stage six prototec. I only got one question wrong!  

This is my Stage 6 prototec:

Prototec August 27

  Basic Facts Learning

I finished today bookwork and Ms Waho told me to try out stage six! I only got one question wrong!  

This is my Stage 6 prototec:

Sympathy poem response.

The connections I made to the title were when something happens to your friend and you feel sad for them and show empathy and know the right things to say.

The poem was organised in three stanzas each with seven lines and the rhyming pattern is ABAABCC, ABAABAA and ABABBCC.

For me the tone of the poem makes me feel sad because it's about a bird trapped in a cage. (I love animals and I could never dream of hurting them!) 

The poetic devices in this poem are rhyming, simile when it says "the river flows like a stream of glass, alliteration "heaven he", personification when it says "cruel bars" "beats his wing" "bird sings",  metaphor when it says "caged bird feels" because it is comparing when you are in a situation when you feel like a caged bird and hyperbole when it says "I know why the caged bird sings" because he can not know.

The meaning of this poem for me is when you show sympathy to someone you care for who has been in some hard times.

How have I done? What could I do to improve my work? Send me a comment to tell me what to change.😊😉😌😄

  

Returned soldier poem report

The connections I made with this title is when a soldier comes home and everyone is celebrating his return and mourning over the dead.

The poem is organised like this: 2 stanzas in the first one and it has 8 lines and the second has 12. The pattern of the poem is AABBAABB AABBAABBAABB. 

The tone of the poem was this: It makes me feel sad and curious about the war because it is talking about a soldier going to the war and coming back from it.

The poetic devices in this poem were rhyming, hyperbole, simile, alliteration, personification.

What I think the meaning of the poem is the war and how bad it was to have in our lovely world.

Do you think I did well? Could you please comment and give me feedback?😊

Prototec August

  Basic Facts Learning

Today we have focused on using Prototec to check-in to see how our basic facts learning is going.  For this session, we had a maximum of 15 minutes to complete it.  

This is my Stage 5 example:

My next step is: To work on my division.

Poetry

 

I like to write poems because they are an easy way to explain/express something that you are learning.

Zones of regulation

This is a drawing of one of the zones of regulation. Some of you may not know what I am talking about, so the zones of regulation are 4 zones, the yellow which is where you are Koko, the blue zone where you are sad, the green zone where you are HAPPY😃 and red zone: