I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Daisy I liked your post it was informative and covered different topics of interest.I liked also how it was about a war topic and you didn't use images of war.It made me focus more on the information.Well done.Stay awesome.
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Hi Daisy I liked your post it was informative and covered different topics of interest.I liked also how it was about a war topic and you didn't use images of war.It made me focus more on the information.Well done.Stay awesome.
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