I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Daisy. I was really interested to see your post about sea otters. They are so cute. Where did you get your information from on the second slide and did you write it y0urself or copy and paste it? Perhaps next time you could organise pages of your slide to specific areas such as habitat, diet, physical features etc.
Hi Daisy I loved your post about sea otters, probably because I love them. they are very social.I have watched them at Willowbank many, many times.Did you know that when they are in a pod or group they always pee and poo in the same spot.Stinky but fascinating.I really liked the opening photo, very vivid. Stay awesome
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Kia ora Daisy.
ReplyDeleteI was really interested to see your post about sea otters. They are so cute. Where did you get your information from on the second slide and did you write it y0urself or copy and paste it?
Perhaps next time you could organise pages of your slide to specific areas such as habitat, diet, physical features etc.
Hi Daisy I loved your post about sea otters, probably because I love them. they are very social.I have watched them at Willowbank many, many times.Did you know that when they are in a pod or group they always pee and poo in the same spot.Stinky but fascinating.I really liked the opening photo, very vivid. Stay awesome
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