I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Daisy! Your ad is very cool! I noticed that it is super colourful and gives the audience a lot of information. Those smoothies sound good to try!
Kia ora Daisy. I love the sound of your restaurant. What was the activity for? Maybe next time, you could tell us why you were doing the activity. I am trying to imagine what sour sugar would taste like.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Daisy! Your ad is very cool! I noticed that it is super colourful and gives the audience a lot of information. Those smoothies sound good to try!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Daisy.
ReplyDeleteI love the sound of your restaurant. What was the activity for? Maybe next time, you could tell us why you were doing the activity. I am trying to imagine what sour sugar would taste like.