I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Daisy I love your paprika slide it shows much information to where you get it. that food looks yummy i love you decorated it its so much pretty~ CHRISTINA #AWESOME
Hi Daisy. I like that you put credits of who did the slide. I also like that you put food that go with paprika. Next time you could put less colours so its easier to read.
kia ora I Gemeve form gilberthorpe school I love that you put heaps on the slide. I also like that you had put the stuff the go with it but the I could not really see the words you put way to much colour in the words.
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Hi Daisy, this is super cool work! Do you ever use paprika when cooking at home?
ReplyDeleteYes we have we used it for cheese scones!
DeleteKia ora Daisy I love your paprika slide it shows much information to where you get it. that food looks yummy i love you decorated it its so much pretty~ CHRISTINA #AWESOME
ReplyDeleteHi Daisy.
ReplyDeleteI like that you put credits of who did the slide. I also like that you put food that go with paprika. Next time you could put less colours so its easier to read.
Kia Ora Daisy I really like your post but I don't know the purpose of this Post, but the food looks interesting. Can you tell us what is this?
ReplyDeletekia ora I Gemeve form gilberthorpe school
ReplyDeleteI love that you put heaps on the slide. I also like that you had put the stuff the go with it but the I could not really see the words you put way to much colour in the words.
Thanks for the comment Gemeve. My team and I may have over coloured it. How are you liking Hornby High?
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