My second prototec for the 31st of August

 Basic Facts Learning 

Today I did stage six prototec. I got them all right. 

This is my Stage 6 prototec:

Prototec August 31st

 Basic Facts Learning 

Today I did stage six prototec. I only got one question wrong!  

This is my Stage 6 prototec:

Prototec August 27

  Basic Facts Learning

I finished today bookwork and Ms Waho told me to try out stage six! I only got one question wrong!  

This is my Stage 6 prototec:

Sympathy poem response.

The connections I made to the title were when something happens to your friend and you feel sad for them and show empathy and know the right things to say.

The poem was organised in three stanzas each with seven lines and the rhyming pattern is ABAABCC, ABAABAA and ABABBCC.

For me the tone of the poem makes me feel sad because it's about a bird trapped in a cage. (I love animals and I could never dream of hurting them!) 

The poetic devices in this poem are rhyming, simile when it says "the river flows like a stream of glass, alliteration "heaven he", personification when it says "cruel bars" "beats his wing" "bird sings",  metaphor when it says "caged bird feels" because it is comparing when you are in a situation when you feel like a caged bird and hyperbole when it says "I know why the caged bird sings" because he can not know.

The meaning of this poem for me is when you show sympathy to someone you care for who has been in some hard times.

How have I done? What could I do to improve my work? Send me a comment to tell me what to change.😊😉😌😄

  

Returned soldier poem report

The connections I made with this title is when a soldier comes home and everyone is celebrating his return and mourning over the dead.

The poem is organised like this: 2 stanzas in the first one and it has 8 lines and the second has 12. The pattern of the poem is AABBAABB AABBAABBAABB. 

The tone of the poem was this: It makes me feel sad and curious about the war because it is talking about a soldier going to the war and coming back from it.

The poetic devices in this poem were rhyming, hyperbole, simile, alliteration, personification.

What I think the meaning of the poem is the war and how bad it was to have in our lovely world.

Do you think I did well? Could you please comment and give me feedback?😊

Prototec August

  Basic Facts Learning

Today we have focused on using Prototec to check-in to see how our basic facts learning is going.  For this session, we had a maximum of 15 minutes to complete it.  

This is my Stage 5 example:

My next step is: To work on my division.