I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, 12 May 2021
STEPSWEB
Saturday, 28 November 2020
Neptune my reading sample.
Tuesday, 15 September 2020
"My shadow" poem response
My Shadow:
Tuesday, 8 September 2020
I wandered lonely as a cloud poem response (By William Wordsworth)
The connections I made to the title was when your friends ditch you and you are trying to find a new friend or two. That's sad cause if I was like that I would want a warm hug from Olaf.
The poem was organised in four stanzas each with six lines and the rhyming pattern was ABABCC ABABCC ABABCC ABABCC.
The tone of the poem for me was happy and at the same time sad and pale. I think it was happy when it says "golden daffodils" and I think that it is sad when it says "They flash upon that inward eye" and pale when it says "I wandered lonely as a cloud that floats on high o'er vales and hills".
The poetic devices in this poem are personification, simile, hyperbole and alliteration. There is alliteration when it says "but be" there is hyperbole when it says "ten thousand I saw at a glance" because well there are not that many daffodils so it is an exaggeration there is another one when it says " a host of golden daffodils" because daffodils are yellow and how can they be hosts?. There a simile when it says "continuous as the stars that shine" and there is lots of personification like when it says " fluttering and dancing in the breeze" and "tossing their heads" and the waves beside them dance" there is two more the second to the last one that I found was "outdid the waves in glee" and last but not least "and dances with the daffodils".
I think the meaning of the poem is thinking about not losing your friend and what you can see around you when you pay attention to the things in our world.
Tuesday, 25 August 2020
Sympathy poem response.
The connections I made to the title were when something happens to your friend and you feel sad for them and show empathy and know the right things to say.
The poem was organised in three stanzas each with seven lines and the rhyming pattern is ABAABCC, ABAABAA and ABABBCC.
For me the tone of the poem makes me feel sad because it's about a bird trapped in a cage. (I love animals and I could never dream of hurting them!)
The poetic devices in this poem are rhyming, simile when it says "the river flows like a stream of glass, alliteration "heaven he", personification when it says "cruel bars" "beats his wing" "bird sings", metaphor when it says "caged bird feels" because it is comparing when you are in a situation when you feel like a caged bird and hyperbole when it says "I know why the caged bird sings" because he can not know.
The meaning of this poem for me is when you show sympathy to someone you care for who has been in some hard times.
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Thursday, 20 August 2020
Returned soldier poem report
Monday, 27 July 2020
Poetry
Friday, 8 May 2020
Wednesday, 29 April 2020
Wednesday, 22 April 2020
Monday, 6 April 2020
Beetle sting-ray
They can grow to 142 cm long and 23 cm wide
They eat worms and dirt
To get around they swim and fly!
If you want to do this just click the link:
https://education.abc.net.au/res/i/L755/index.html
Wednesday, 25 March 2020
My Octo-beetle
She lives in Freezing water.
She is 45cm long 23cm wide.
She eats algae and waterweed
She swims and crawls to try bite you!!!
Monday, 16 March 2020
Maya Angelou"s cool video
Maya Angelou on Biteable.
Maya Angelou was such an inspiration that my teacher choose her for us to learn about, she is an inspiration for me because she never gave up on her dreams!!
Civil Rights Movements aim to give everybody an equal right regardless of color skin color, gender, nationality, religion, disability or age. The aim of the movement which peaked in the 1960s was to ensure that the rights of all people are equal and are protected by the law. Civil rights include a number of things, for example, the right to free speech, assembly, a fair trial. You can read more about this and the amazing people that helped to make these changes below. As always have fun learning and enjoy.
Monday, 9 December 2019
My Creature.
Lives: In a Forest up a tree!
Size: 15 cm long and 10 cm wide!
Eats: Flax & feathers & flower stalks.
Powers: Sting/kill and fly up to 200,000 miles per five seconds
Tuesday, 3 December 2019
Thursday, 14 November 2019
Wednesday, 23 October 2019
Monday, 21 October 2019
Guy Fawkes.
Guy Fawkes on Biteable.
At literacy, we watch the video about the gunpowder plot and then we had to come up with a question and put it on a DLO and share it with you guys. I took ages to think of a question but I did in the end.
Hope you enjoyed it!






