INTRODUCTION: This week we have been learning about reptiles for reading and for writing we have been learning about information reports.
This is my DLO about reptiles and wolves:
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
INTRODUCTION: This week we have been learning about reptiles for reading and for writing we have been learning about information reports.
This is my DLO about reptiles and wolves:
The connections I made to the title was when your friends ditch you and you are trying to find a new friend or two. That's sad cause if I was like that I would want a warm hug from Olaf.
The poem was organised in four stanzas each with six lines and the rhyming pattern was ABABCC ABABCC ABABCC ABABCC.
The tone of the poem for me was happy and at the same time sad and pale. I think it was happy when it says "golden daffodils" and I think that it is sad when it says "They flash upon that inward eye" and pale when it says "I wandered lonely as a cloud that floats on high o'er vales and hills".
The poetic devices in this poem are personification, simile, hyperbole and alliteration. There is alliteration when it says "but be" there is hyperbole when it says "ten thousand I saw at a glance" because well there are not that many daffodils so it is an exaggeration there is another one when it says " a host of golden daffodils" because daffodils are yellow and how can they be hosts?. There a simile when it says "continuous as the stars that shine" and there is lots of personification like when it says " fluttering and dancing in the breeze" and "tossing their heads" and the waves beside them dance" there is two more the second to the last one that I found was "outdid the waves in glee" and last but not least "and dances with the daffodils".
I think the meaning of the poem is thinking about not losing your friend and what you can see around you when you pay attention to the things in our world.
The author of this poem is RUDYARD KIPLING.
The connections that I, made to the title was if something happens out of the blue or suddenly to you but you don't expect it to happen.
The poem was organised like 4 stanzas each with 8 lines and the rhyming pattern is AAAABCBC ABABCDCD ABABCDCD ABABCDCD.
The tone of the poem for me was when you read this poem it feels like it's the boys dad or mum saying advice to their son so that he knows what to do when he gets older I think that because it says “And which is more you’ll be a man my son!”
The personification and hyperbole. There is Hyperbole when it says "to keep your head when all are losing theirs" And "You can meet with T
The meaning of the poem for me was when your parents are giving you advice about something and YOU NEED TO PAY ATTENTION.