I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey Daisy, This is a great post. I like the way that you have explained how your cats have different personalities. I think it's pretty funny that you think your cat is grumpy haha! Too make this post better it would be great for you to explain why you are posting about cats and which activity you are choosing to do. Don't forget to check out other students blogs too! Here is an example: Venice at Hornby Primary School http://hpsvenicen.blogspot.com (copy and paste the link). - Miss Morgan
Hi Miss Morgan. Thanks for the comment! I love my cats even though they don't like each other. My cat is a grumpy puss puss because they fight, they hiss and growl. Your amazing. -Daisy
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Hey Daisy,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great post. I like the way that you have explained how your cats have different personalities. I think it's pretty funny that you think your cat is grumpy haha!
Too make this post better it would be great for you to explain why you are posting about cats and which activity you are choosing to do.
Don't forget to check out other students blogs too! Here is an example: Venice at Hornby Primary School http://hpsvenicen.blogspot.com (copy and paste the link).
- Miss Morgan
Hi Miss Morgan.
DeleteThanks for the comment!
I love my cats even though they don't like each other.
My cat is a grumpy puss puss because they fight, they hiss and growl.
Your amazing.
-Daisy