I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This is my pavlova that I made from scratch, it was hard but I enjoyed it all the same! I love pavlovas even though I hardly ever have it. Pavlovas are big meringues with fruit on top! Do you like pavlovas?
Hello, It's Lydia from Hornby Primary School Room 7 here. I like your pavlova. Maybe you could add more detail how you created your pavlova. Did you have fun creating this?
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