I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My name is Natasha - I'm a year 11 student from Hornby High and I'm going to be checking out a couple of your posts on the Summer Learning Journey throughout the holidays :)
This is a really cool way of displaying your work Daisy! You're the first person I've seen who has used Biteable to present their work. I also like you're reasoning, that's a pretty cool analogy. April is a very pretty name, and so is Daisy!
If you want to improve your posts, you could add a little bit at the top of your post explaining that you're doing it for the Summer Learning Journey? I see that you've added a label to your post which is excellent, but it might help viewers if they have a little bit of information on what the SLJ is :)
Do you use Biteable very often?
Great work once again Daisy, can't wait to see more awesome posts like this :)
Thanks Natasha. I love using biteable because instead of having to read a really boring slide or something you get to watch it, and it gets noticed more often! I was doing the SLJ and my parents told me I needed to get off so I didn't have time! I might have time later!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Daisy!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Natasha - I'm a year 11 student from Hornby High and I'm going to be checking out a couple of your posts on the Summer Learning Journey throughout the holidays :)
This is a really cool way of displaying your work Daisy! You're the first person I've seen who has used Biteable to present their work. I also like you're reasoning, that's a pretty cool analogy. April is a very pretty name, and so is Daisy!
If you want to improve your posts, you could add a little bit at the top of your post explaining that you're doing it for the Summer Learning Journey? I see that you've added a label to your post which is excellent, but it might help viewers if they have a little bit of information on what the SLJ is :)
Do you use Biteable very often?
Great work once again Daisy, can't wait to see more awesome posts like this :)
Thanks Natasha.
ReplyDeleteI love using biteable because instead of having to read a really boring slide or something you get to watch it, and it gets noticed more often!
I was doing the SLJ and my parents told me I needed to get off so I didn't have time!
I might have time later!