I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello daisy my name is jonte from whakamawa. I like your animation. you have done a good job at this. but you cald have put a little more people in the risk takers slide please.
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Hello daisy my name is jonte from whakamawa.
ReplyDeleteI like your animation.
you have done a good job at this.
but you cald have put a little more people in the risk takers slide please.