I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Daisy, I really like it, it makes me go, WOW! And also I like it when you added the Steps Web Link in it! So people that are new doesn't have to search it up and just go to your blog! Maybe add more a bit detail?
Ello Daisy it is me Marsali WOW you have done lots of steps good job you have done more them me you are great at doing steps. Maybe next time you can add more text about what you are going to do next time or are you just keeping doing what you are doing. are you going to change anything about it tho. I love how you told as what day the fist time you did it was on. But what was your first step time? Bye from: Marsali
Sup it's me cole I really like the detail that you put into the Google drawing and the detail is amazing baby talk about more about what you have done to there.
Hello Daisy, I like the way you put a image on there so people know what your talking about. Maybe next time you could put more text so there is more information. Did you get past your goal level?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
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ReplyDeletewow it is so good
ReplyDeleteHi Daisy Olivia Here.
ReplyDeleteI really like that you add writing about what it is for.
maybe next time you could add what level you are on.
Kia Ora Olivia, I already have made a blog post during lockdown aout my levels. Thanks for the suggestion though! :)
DeleteHi Daisy,
ReplyDeleteI really like it, it makes me go, WOW! And also I like it when you added the Steps Web Link in it! So people that are new doesn't have to search it up and just go to your blog! Maybe add more a bit detail?
Kia Ora Blessy, Thanks for the feedback! What do you mean with add some more detail?
Deletewow that is amazing
ReplyDeleteEllo Daisy it is me Marsali
ReplyDeleteWOW you have done lots of steps good job
you have done more them me you are great at doing steps.
Maybe next time you can add more text about what you are going to do next time or are you just keeping doing what you are doing. are you going to change anything about it tho.
I love how you told as what day the fist time you did it was on. But what was your first step time? Bye from: Marsali
cool
ReplyDeleteSup it's me cole I really like the detail that you put into the Google drawing and the detail is amazing baby talk about more about what you have done to there.
ReplyDeleteHello Daisy,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put a image on there so people know what your talking about.
Maybe next time you could put more text so there is more information.
Did you get past your goal level?