I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Dasiy I like your letter to mr wilkinson, and yeah I agree with you if it is exstended to 1 hour you will get more time to fineash your work. next time work a little on full stops and commers and stuff like that. but it is still good.Bye
Kia Ora Daisy, I think that the letter you wrote to Mr Wilkinson well make him want to make fun friday longer. Maybe next time you write a letter to someone you should use the correct spelling instead of u but you, but still a great blog post. Blog you later😊
Kia Ora Daisy, I think that the letter you wrote to Mr Wilkinson well make him want to make fun friday longer. Maybe next time you write a letter to someone els. great blog post. 😊😊
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Kia ora Dasiy I like your letter to mr wilkinson, and yeah I agree with you if it is exstended to 1 hour you will get more time to fineash your work. next time work a little on full stops and commers and stuff like that. but it is still good.Bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Daisy,
ReplyDeleteI think that the letter you wrote to Mr Wilkinson well make him want to make fun friday longer. Maybe next time you write a letter to someone you should use the correct spelling instead of u but you, but still a great blog post.
Blog you later😊
Kia Ora Daisy,
ReplyDeleteI think that the letter you wrote to Mr Wilkinson well make him want to make fun friday longer. Maybe next time you write a letter to someone els. great blog post.
😊😊