I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey Daisy, This is a cool blog post about sushi! I don't like sushi but I know for a fact you do. What did you do this for? Was this in your home-room classes? My favorite part is the picture ( because there is not much ) Anyway i'm leaving now, bye.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Daisy! I love how you made sure to keep your slogan short and sweet! Are there any describing words you could add?
ReplyDeleteHey Daisy, This is a cool blog post about sushi!
ReplyDeleteI don't like sushi but I know for a fact you do.
What did you do this for? Was this in your home-room classes? My favorite part is the picture ( because there is not much )
Anyway i'm leaving now, bye.