I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I like how you explained the pattern of your poem like chorus. The words you have used support the chorus very well. Why did you decide to do your post on corona?
Fiona here from the SLJ team. I'm so glad to see you have signed up to do the Summer Learning Journey.
You have written a great chorus all about Coronavirus which is a very relevant topic for 2020. I really like the way you made a Screencastify video of yourself singing your song - ka pai!
I hope you are enjoying the summer so far. I can't wait to see more of your blog posts in the future.
Kia ora Daisy. I have just moved your blog to my class blog list and noticed that you had created this post. I like the way you explained how you out the chorus together and that you made a Screencastify to explain and share. The only suggestion I would have is maybe not use the word damn.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Daisy
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained the pattern of your poem like chorus. The words you have used support the chorus very well. Why did you decide to do your post on corona?
Keep up the good work
Molly :)
Kia ora Daisy,
ReplyDeleteFiona here from the SLJ team. I'm so glad to see you have signed up to do the Summer Learning Journey.
You have written a great chorus all about Coronavirus which is a very relevant topic for 2020. I really like the way you made a Screencastify video of yourself singing your song - ka pai!
I hope you are enjoying the summer so far. I can't wait to see more of your blog posts in the future.
Great work, Daisy!
Fiona (SLJ).
Kia ora Daisy.
ReplyDeleteI have just moved your blog to my class blog list and noticed that you had created this post.
I like the way you explained how you out the chorus together and that you made a Screencastify to explain and share.
The only suggestion I would have is maybe not use the word damn.